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Monday, April 8, 2013

Revelations

Revelations 
A fate already done
Believing in what is right
More then an even bargain
The Barman lines them up
Lighting them up 
one at a time
All in a neat little row
The fire burns long
After the scars have healed 
A heart of vengeance 
A will of its own
Controlled with out oxygen  
A transaction of the unscrupulous
On the edges of honesty 
If honesty is silence
Revelation of defiance 
Followed by I don't know
Because silence can be painful
It has a patience
That needs to be broken
A stoic mask of indifference
For silence means its already done

2 comments:

Patent Box guy said...

I love this poem, it speaks really loudly but also leaves a strange silence behind it. I love the way the lines:

Lighting them up
one at a time
All in a neat little row

enact the meaning of the words themselves, the lines lining up like a neat little row, yet at the same time demonstrating a sense of fracture, of distance, in the white spaces between them.

And the ending, it's very impacting.

Anonymous said...

Thank you for your comment.