World of predictability
Even ironic smiles fade
Time stops and dilates
Conversational convenience
Cyclical Nietzchean reality
Hungry for hope
In a symphony of rain
Tranquility as the colours fades to blue
Stating the obvious
As the blue fades to black
Analyzing the obscure
Orwellian dystopia
On a prairie plain
2 comments:
Your poems are becoming more concrete (adding a bit of metaphor grit; your poem yesterday for example). I guess when I read poetry I always think lyrically -- parts of your poems could be sung.
Thank You Neil. Which parts do you think could be worked it a song. I am interested in your ideas...I hope one day that these poems can be art..Maybe a little gritty decadence worked in.
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