Blue sky's and rain
Wearing a smile insane
Turn away with out good bye
Kind of know the why
Being near you
Is like Arguing with the wind
Here we go again
Thinking you know the pain
Like blue sky and rain
Thundershowers and winter storms
Replaying the same old songs
Reliving the past
Thinking it is better some how
Think you know pain
Like red wine and disdain
Every meal needs something to wash it away
Turned with out looking back
There is a Dignity in that
Like blue sky and rain
2 comments:
Is this blue sky and rain a Yin and Yang metaphor -- blue vs grey?
I quite like the metaphors but ... I'm not so sure I like mixed metaphors in poetry (i.e., blue sky and rain & meals and red wine). But so what ... I'm but a consumer of your poetry. Keep that quill in the ink well.
I will try to clean them up.
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